God is a person who is the most mightiest person and he's the person who erase our sins. God is also the person who always is in our heart and the person who protect us. He's the only one that is perfect in this world. He's always seeing us in the earth. He will never leave us alone. He's giving us the most powerful love.
Where can we talk to God? We can talk to him in the church, we also can communicate with him when we were praying. He looks handsome.
Why does he love us? He loves us because he doesn't want us to go to the evil hell. Where does he live? He lives in 2 homes, heaven and our heart. You could look at God's home whenever you are in the church.
This is my belief about a mighty God!
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Hi Andrew, Your tense is consistent but you have a few small mistakes. I have copied and pasted so that you can see my corrections. 7/10
God is a person who is the most mightiest person and he's the person who erases our sins. God is also the person who always is in our hearts and the person who protects us. He's the only one that is perfect in this world. He's always seeing us on the earth. He will never leave us alone. He's giving us the most powerful love.
Where can we talk to God? We can talk to him in church and we also can communicate with him when we are praying. He looks handsome.
Why does he love us? He loves us because he doesn't want us to go to the evil hell. Where does he live? He lives in 2 homes, heaven and in our heart. You can look at God's home whenever you are in church.
This is my belief about almighty God!
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